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Hot off the press. The first guest edition of What Was on Her . . . with Lenore Appelhans.
Lenore is the author of the Memory Chronicles and the recently-released picture book Chick-o-Saurus Rex, illustrated by her husband, Daniel Jennewein. Lenore is also widely known for her five-year-running book blog, Presenting Lenore. Here, through a re-creation of events two weeks ago, Lenore gives us a bit of insight into what goes on the few days before an author’s book deadline.
What Was on Lenore Appelhans’s . . .
Agenda: Revisions for Chasing Before, the sequel to The Memory of After. This would be the third major draft. Editor asked for significant plot changes. I added: nearly 20,000 words, several new key scenes, very cool backstory, more emotional heft to the final showdown, a whole new character and worldbuilding/setting details. I also completely rewrote one major character. Also, line edits. I had about six weeks to pull this off.
Mind (stream of consciousness): “Why did I include all of these unnecessary dialogue tags?” (Four hours later) “I hate dialogue tags!”
“Chocolate! I need chocolate. And coffee.”
3 a.m. day of deadline: “OMG – I have to change one of these redshirt characters into a man, or else readers are going to think I only kill women off.”
(cat howls, stomps on keyboard) (Lenore craughs – “cry + laugh”) (cat howls louder because she thinks Lenore is dying)
4 a.m. “This is a masterpiece.” (sends to editor) (commences freak-out and waiting) (crashes)
9 a.m. (wakes up in a cold sweat) “What in the world did I send in last night?!” (thinks of about a trillion things that still need to be fixed)
Desk: Scattered scraps of paper with furiously scribbled (nearly unintelligible) notes. Copy of The Memory of After for fact checking purposes. Angry cat.
To-Do List that Never Got Done: Everything not book related. At least I showered.
Stovetop: Daniel’s cooking for me! So nice to have him feeding me real food while I go through deadline insanity.
Playlist: I have a Chasing Before playlist that I listen to non-stop. Also, two days before deadline, I bought the album Bad Blood by Bastille. It is freaky how many themes it shares with Chasing Before. The whole album could be the soundtrack to my book. The singer/songwriter Dan Smith and I must be sharing a muse.
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To keep up to date with Lenore, follow her at lenoreappelhans.com, presentinglenore.blogspot.com and on twitter @lenoreva
Sandra Nickel
Love this – fascinating and funny. What a great idea! Please do more guest editions!
Thanks Christina! I’m definitely doing more. In fact, the next guest edition will come out on October 10. Be sure to stop by then and see who will be up!
Yay!!!!! I’ve followed Lenore’s blog for years! Woo hoo! Love this!
Thanks so much Linda!
Thank you for this guest post, Sandra and Lenore! I believe Presenting Lenore was one of the blogs that supported my debut YA novel, Gringolandia, and now I get to know the reviewer. Good luck with your new book, Lenore! Those short deadlines are crazy, but I know in my case, if I didn’t have a short deadline, I would have ignored the long deadline until it became a short deadline.
Ha! Lyn, that’s the diversity of the world, isn’t it. Some of us can’t stand the stress of the last-minute and some of us thrive on it! You are obviously a thriver–Lenore too. Word is that her editor LOVED what she did.